Sunday Memeage

[jjpor]

Oh, because I don't already spend enough time on lj talking about how clever I think I am:

Meme robbed from lindenharp:

Pick a paragraph (or any passage less than 500 words) from any fanfic I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

My 'Spoon page:

www.whofic.com/viewuser.php

Comments

[hangingfire.livejournal.com]

"Made in Sheffield" made me snort coffee, I'll have you know.

Thank you for the commentary; that was as enjoyable reading as the original story. ^_^ I really liked your characterization of the Brig here, and that matter-of-fact tone is part of what really makes it. And I for one never thought he was bluffing—on a matter like this, with these kind of people, I doubt he'd go in with anything less than everything he needed.

[jjpor.livejournal.com]

Heh - because if their latter-day incarnation is anything to go by, it's the kind of no-brainer move TW actually might make...

Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed reading my, er, thoughts. ;D No, he wasn't bluffing; I think the Brig plays to win, and I don't think he lacks boldness or ruthlessness either, at least not in his younger days. But you know, he doesn't make a song and dance about it, that's the kind of silly business you'd expect from TW and their ilk.