Fic: Torchwood 1913: Jack be Nimble

[jjpor]

Fic: Torchwood 1913: Jack be Nimble, Part 16

The next spiffing instalment! In which Gerald muses about things and joins Jack in fondling some weapons; in which Lydia improves her mind; in which Harriet technobabbles with the best of them, and in which Charles draws some pretty pictures. And then everybody stops sitting around and gets back to the plot! :D I know nothing about multidimensional geometry by the way that isn't in Wikipedia!

The link:

www.whofic.com/viewstory.php

Comments

[evilawyer.livejournal.com]

Okay! Have finally caught up with this one. Commenting here so as to comment on its totality. I like it! It's fresh and imaginative. You've taken characters who you'd have missed completely if you blinked (or went to get something to drink) and given them such meatiness. And Jack is perfectly in character. I should be able to keep up from this point on. Now I just have to go back and catch up with your other writing, including that original fic you're working on.

[jjpor.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much indeed, and I'm glad you like it. Gerald and Harriet seemed like pretty cool characters for the minute or so they were onscreen (the rest of the gang were seen only in photographic form, for about a second!); I wanted to give them more stories really...and kind of got carried away...

I'll be interested to hear what you think of the original fic. I haven't posted much more of it after the first couple of batches, partly because I want to rewrite most of what I've already done pretty extensively before I carry on, and partly because I've been writing TW fanfic! That's got to stop... ;D