Fic: The Volteze Falcon

[jjpor]

Fic: The Volteze Falcon, Part Five: Captain John Hart

The next instalment, and hopefully some explanation as to just what the heck John Hart, of all people, is doing on the bus with the rest of the gang. Also a few more hints at just what is going on here, hopefully not giving the game away too obviously (but I worry I kind of am); although it's not as if the big "twist" makes much sense anyway even when it does get revealed in the next part. This was supposed to be the last part, but ended up not being, mainly because I spent so much wordage describing Jack and John's big stupid slapstick swordfight. Because I am a child! And more shippy, slashy unnecessariness for thems as likes that kind of thing...

The link:

www.whofic.com/viewstory.php

Comments

[thisbluespirit]

I am going to read the rest of this at some point, honest. I'm looking forward to it, but have been catching up with stuff and writing bizarre things instead.

[jjpor.livejournal.com]

Oh no, that's quite all right! I know how it is. I'd be interested to know what you do think of it when you get the chance; there are some *ahem*...interesting elements that seem to have crept into it, and poor old Eve, Harry and Sam, who are really why I started writing it, seem to have been completely sidelined!