I have the feeling that this is one fic of yours I am going to have to leave alone. :-(
[Unknown site tag], stop with the corruption, now! I'd much rather have more of the fantasy novel.
(And while I'm here: what I was vaguely getting towards saying the other day when i worried about us commenting it to death was that: you have a beginning and a good beginning. You're not sure about the style, but that's okay. This is probably too late; there's probably a 10,000 epic battle prologue in prohress, but unless you have in mind any changes to that that change What Happens (and therefore What Happens Next), just write on. Get wherever it is you're going, and by the time you get there, what should be at the start will be blindingly obvious anyway. On the other hand, despite my lack of interest in battles - sorry! - I always find your warfare so poetically written, I enjoy it nonetheless. :lol: It's very odd giving advice on a fragment and not knowing anyway. Carry on writing what you want to, as long as you persevere with something - mostly the same something!)
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Date: 2010-01-18 07:51 pm (UTC)[Unknown site tag], stop with the corruption, now! I'd much rather have more of the fantasy novel.
(And while I'm here: what I was vaguely getting towards saying the other day when i worried about us commenting it to death was that: you have a beginning and a good beginning. You're not sure about the style, but that's okay. This is probably too late; there's probably a 10,000 epic battle prologue in prohress, but unless you have in mind any changes to that that change What Happens (and therefore What Happens Next), just write on. Get wherever it is you're going, and by the time you get there, what should be at the start will be blindingly obvious anyway. On the other hand, despite my lack of interest in battles - sorry! - I always find your warfare so poetically written, I enjoy it nonetheless. :lol: It's very odd giving advice on a fragment and not knowing anyway. Carry on writing what you want to, as long as you persevere with something - mostly the same something!)