Fic: Protect and Survive
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Fic: Protect and Survive, Part VIII: Protect and Survive
The conclusion! Answers, though they may not be the ones the Doctor wants to hear, and a solution, of sorts; here's hoping it makes sense. More past Doctor cameos too. All of the quotations I have used as chapter headings in this fic are from the movie Dr Strangelove, and some dialogue in this part is taken from the Who stories Genesis of the Daleks by Terry Nation and Resurrection of the Daleks by Eric Saward. The Daleks belong to the Terry Nation estate. None of these things belong to me!
The link:
www.whofic.com/viewstory.php
The conclusion! Answers, though they may not be the ones the Doctor wants to hear, and a solution, of sorts; here's hoping it makes sense. More past Doctor cameos too. All of the quotations I have used as chapter headings in this fic are from the movie Dr Strangelove, and some dialogue in this part is taken from the Who stories Genesis of the Daleks by Terry Nation and Resurrection of the Daleks by Eric Saward. The Daleks belong to the Terry Nation estate. None of these things belong to me!
The link:
www.whofic.com/viewstory.php
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Date: 2009-06-07 07:23 pm (UTC)(By the time I recover, it might be up on the site. There's method in my madness).
The conclusion! Oo-er. :-D
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Date: 2009-06-07 07:41 pm (UTC)And now, all that remains is...ah, all of those other WIPs...
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Date: 2009-06-07 10:24 pm (UTC)Yay, Obligatory Romana Reference!
Now for Sontarans Up the Jungle!
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Date: 2009-06-08 06:39 pm (UTC)And, you know what? Sontarans Up the Jungle sounds like a good idea after all that misery and suffering; lemme see what I can do...
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Date: 2009-06-08 07:58 pm (UTC)Hot, sweaty jungle nights...
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Date: 2009-06-09 06:59 pm (UTC)(Yeah, I think we've had this conversation before! XD )
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Date: 2009-06-08 12:24 am (UTC)I didn't find it a cop-out at all since you set it up so cleanly. I love the reuse of dialogue and description at the end (said that in the Teaspoon review too), though I feel compelled to point out a minor possible typo:
Nevertheless, there were people walking on long strand of beach
Pretty sure there should be a 'the' in there somewhere.
Thanks for the ride JJpor; it was magnificent.
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Date: 2009-06-08 06:48 pm (UTC)Thank you very much indeed for your kind words, and for following this and egging me on to finish it. I'm glad the ending worked for you, because it was one thing I wasn't really that confident about. You know, after every chapter somebody said "I hope you have a way out of all of this!", and was like "Er...yeah..? Yeah, of course I do! Honest..." I guess this was my NAverse story; you should see some of the things they do to the Doctor (or, more often, the Doctor does to others) in some of those; dark and grim doesn't begin to cover it.
If you ever get a chance, read The Left-Handed Hummingbird; you'd get a kick out of it, I think, with all of its Mesoamericanisms. Unfortunately it has Ace-in-name-only in it and the overrated Benny Summerfield, but you can't have everything.
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Date: 2009-06-09 03:48 am (UTC)As for the NAs, I've got to get into those one of these days. Don't know what it says about me, but I'm rather fond of dark stories, and quite especially ones where there is a possibility of the hero going evil or being possessed.
Ace-in-name-only; would that be a poorly written Ace, or an off-screen Ace?
And Benny... I know less about her than I would like. She seems interesting, just from what I've heard, but she's over-rated you say? But she IS an archaeologist, so...
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Date: 2009-06-09 07:15 pm (UTC)Anyway...I think Benny is all sorts of amusing and a likeable companion (and I like the couple of her solo adventures I've caught up with just fine), but I don't know if she was the bestest companion ever as she was often thought of back in the 90s; she may well not be as overrated any more as she perhaps was then. She is in the Dying Days though, my possibly-second-favourite NA; my first favourite is Timewyrm:Revelation by Paul Cornell, which was early on in the range, before the "character-development" Ace went through. I like it because firstly, it's a twisty-turny hallucinatory sort of story, a bit like the Mind Robber or something, and secondly it's possibly the definitive portrayal of Seven and Ace, in any medium. And it has cameos from One, Three, Five, Four that I can think of, and I think Two and Six at least get a couple of lines. So, it's great all round, really. Or so I think, anyway...
Mind you, I also really like Transit, which is the NA that sort of split the fandom; all of the guns and violence and non-stop swearing put a lot of people off, but it was a cracking story, and Seven was great in it.
Anyway, enough of that. If I drop any cash on secondhand Who books in the near future, I think it'll be on some of the Missing Adventures/Past Doctor Adventures, because I never kept up with them as well as I did with the NAs (and my NA keeping-up-with was patchy after the first couple of years), and it has come to my attention that there are some crackers there too.
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Date: 2009-06-10 02:14 am (UTC)I've heard Benny in one or two audios, and read her in several fics, I really do have to bite down and read Dying Days since it *is* free after all. Also, I need to actually get myself better acquainted with Bernice before I go off accusing river of being a poor substitute for her. From what I've read/listened to though, I think I rather like Benny. She acts suitably archaeologisty; running off for the nearest drinking establishment at any opportunity.. and getting down and dirty with Eight, apparently.
As for Doctor Who literature and spending $$, I've heard *interesting* things about the title 'Blue Angel' and I think I need to find a copy just to confirm that it really is as weird as all that... Apparently the Doctor's mother is a mermaid, and Eight give birth to a fairy via his leg!??
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Date: 2009-06-10 06:15 pm (UTC)I think the online version of the Dying Days is a bit different from my old battered paperback copy, but still well worth a read; the Brig out of retirement yet again, Ice Warriors taking over Britain (they make it clear to the rest of the world that they only want Britain, and the rest of the world decides to let them keep it!), Eight being quietly awesome (the bit with the homemade hot air balloon/parachute thingy is just great; really). And Benny's great in it too; I think you may have a point there with regard to River, actually.
I will say one thing; the plot is suspiciously similar to Aliens of London/World War Three, but with Ice Warriors. Possibly the single greatest thing I've ever read in Who fiction, though, is the bit where the Ice Lord is being crowned King of Britain and isn't too enthusiastic about the oath he has to swear ("Who isss thisss Jesssusss Chrissst?? I challenge him to sssingle combat!" etc.) Either that or the bit where Eight's saying to Benny something like "Well, the Martian spaceship's been hovering over London for twenty minutes now and hasn't blown anything up; must be a good sign," and she replies with something like; "those big Martian cannon take twenty-five minutes to charge up."
Yes, some of the Eight novels are a little bit weird; Iris Wildthyme shows up in a couple of them, and then there's Larry Miles's Time-War-before-there-was-a-Time-War arc which they brushed under the carpet about halfway through the range.
There's one book which I can't remember whether it was one of the MAs or the PDAs, because I read it but never owned it; called "Rags"; it's basically an attempt to do something dark and horrible and character-torturing with Three and the UNIT family, who aren't really the obvious choices for such a treatment, if you ask me. As a Three fan, I don't know what you'd think of it, but if you ever get the chance to read it...
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Date: 2009-06-11 06:55 am (UTC)I still enjoyed it, though: it's not badly written, the Ragged Army is an interesting conceit, and I admit to a little parochial thrill when the action kicked off in Princetown and the closest it came to the Home Counties was Glastonbury.
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Date: 2009-06-11 08:04 pm (UTC)I think it highlights one issue that the MAs/PDAs ran into; where writers tried to make them more than novel-length professional-standard fanfics, the effect was always a little bit jarring. On the one hand, people like Mark Gatiss and Gareth Roberts were writing spot-on pastiches of Two-era historicals or Three-Master Shenanigans or Season 17 hijinks, which were great reads, but unambitious. On the other hand, the stories that tried to actually do significant things to the characters came off as a little bit strange, slotted as they were into gaps in the onscreen continuity. I can't remember now whether they had some sort of reset button in place, but it stretches credulity that the UNIT posse could go through something like "Rags" and then all be back to cosy-cups-of-tea-in-the-lab and bantering-with-the-Brig the very next week.
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Date: 2009-06-08 02:30 am (UTC)That's great Seven and Ace, and absolutely terrifying. I was gasping and having chills run through me in various parts. Part of it's the dark Doctor; part of it's being old enough to have grown up with the fear of nuclear war being a constant nightmare.
Because I don't have a Teaspoon account, I'll say here that I was amazed by your "Gaze Into the Abyss" Romana/Seven/Eight/Time War story, as well, and this hit about as hard as that one did. (I'm no fan of New Who, but if we have to accept the Time War, then your version of it is now my canon.) Congratulations and keep writing!
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Date: 2009-06-08 07:02 pm (UTC)Anyway, thank you very much for your kind words; I'm glad you enjoyed this and that you enjoyed Seven and Ace; I love writing them. I don't know if it was a good idea having Ace off-stage for the ending, but I suppose I was trying to ratchet up the stakes. And I'm glad the nuclear war stuff was suitably evocative too.
You know, if anyone asked me to pick a favourite fic I've written, I might go for "Gaze into the Abyss"; and not just because I'm a shameless Doc/Romana shipper; I just seemed to roll a lot of sixes when I was writing that one. Ah well, enough self-praise...
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Date: 2009-06-11 02:47 am (UTC)Would that the writers of the NuWho series shared your viewpoint. There's fanfic out of canon, and then there's just screwing everything up because of a desire to appeal to a certain demographic. I've been living in terror (well, not really because it's not that big of a deal, but still) of what Moffat (whom I really like) is going to be doing with ClassicWho-NuWho continuity ever since I read somewhere that he said a story about time travel can't ever be written so as to lack continuity (or something like that). Still, since the continuity was shot to Hell by RTD and company (in my opinion, anyway), I suppose it can't get too much worse, no matter what Moffat does.
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Date: 2009-06-11 08:17 pm (UTC)Having said that, I have no reason to expect him to be any more respectful of canon than RTD was; certainly, some of his remarks suggest that he won't be. Still, he has actually made use of time travel as a plot point in at least one of his stories (which is a lot rarer than it should be in a show that's supposed to be _about_ time travel), so if he does go trampling all over canon, at least we can expect his handwaving to be more elegant and plausible-sounding than we're used to. :D
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Date: 2009-06-12 08:36 pm (UTC)I was watching one of the special features on the Trial of a Time Lord DVD the other day and they were saying this very same thing. It's too bad how agendas can get in the way of a good show.
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Date: 2009-06-13 08:33 pm (UTC)On the other hand, I think that at times the RTD era has been almost dismissive of some of the qualities that made the original show so distinctive and so good, in its heyday. I really do think that there is a middle ground to be found here, but as I say, whether Moffat is the man to do it...time will tell.
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Date: 2009-06-15 01:44 am (UTC)As you say, however, time will tell.
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Date: 2009-06-16 02:11 am (UTC)Or, to call a shovel a spade, adolescent titillation for the sake of nothing more than itself. Oh, and for the sake of ratings. On the other hand, I was a rather boring, cloistered adolescent. Perhaps I am not qualified to judge. (****snork****) Yeah, right. Like I'll ever cop to that.
I agree. I think a year's hiatus may have ultimately disastrous impact on the show's viability. A handful of specials does not a whetting of the appetite make. It's not like there was a rampant, 16-year-long, all-across-the-board collective howl into the wilderness for the show's return. Other brains in charge may well have decided that's Tennant's popularity (and I guess RTD's clout, but it's not like he has lots of teenyboppers throwing themselves at him the way the star does so it may not matter as much) simply wasn't strong enough to forestall moving right along to Eleven. I would have if I'd been in charge. Momentum is all.
Stunt-casting may be a little distasteful in concept, but it can be executed tastefully in practice. Pussy Galore in the Vervoid section of "Trial of a Time Lord" (sheez, I wanna call her Anne Francis but I know that's Honey West; I'm just channeling the guys in "Resevoir Dogs" --- I least I know it's not Pam Grier) was, I think and for what the story was, nicely executed stunt-casting. However, if it's all going to be in the service of feeding the self-pitying, solace-seeking trip we've seen in NuWho, then it'll be awful. I may very well stop watching then, and I'll be seriously pissed off because I'm actually prouder of my 31 years of Doctor Who appreciation than I am of my 21 years spent practicing law. Oif - How sad is that?
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Date: 2009-06-16 07:12 pm (UTC)But yeah, I do think the hiatus may prove to be a serious mistake. Everywhere I go online nowadays I see young Tennant fans saying things like they aren't really as into Doctor Who as they once were, thanks to the long wait between new instalments. As if Matt Smith wasn't going to have a hard enough time competing with the runaway juggernaut that is the Cult of Tennant. I can only shake my head and wonder at what their reasoning was for doing things the way they have. I think you may have a point about them puttting off a painful change for as long as the could, but seriously, how cool would it have been if the Journey's End regeneration had been a real one - straight out of the blue - and in the middle of that blaze of publicity that accompanied the cliffhanger?? Momentum, as you point out, is everything, in televison as in anything else; I hope they can get the ball rolling again next year and that a lot of the young fans who have only ever known Tennant as the Doctor will stick around and given them a chance.
I think stunt-casting is often in the eye of the beholder; if you have the opportunity to cast a classy, big-name actor in a role, you should probably go for it, but some of the rumours you hear just make you want to scream NO! DON'T! Still, I don't know what they'd have to do to make me stop watching it now. Marry the Doctor off permanently to Rose and have them raise 2.4 Time Tots? I even forgave them Journey's End. Eventually. Well, when I say "forgave"...
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Date: 2009-06-17 12:11 am (UTC)the hiatus may prove to be a serious mistake
Not the first one the BBC has ever made vis-a-vis Doctor Who, and probably not the last. Unfortunately.
I can only shake my head and wonder at what their reasoning was for doing things the way they have.
I'll bet it's at least in part to revenue on Ten's action figure sales and a brutal game of hardball with Tennant's extremely astute and adept agent. S/he must be to have gotten him the sweet deal of "finagle on your contract and still get to hang around on your terms" he got. Alas, the show itself suffers after a dramatic rebirth.
...how cool would it have been if the Journey's End regeneration had been a real one...
Cooler than a penguin's soles. And something that could have propelled the show into perpetual, money-making popularity. Time Lords are supposed to regenerate, and it would have been well for the show to remind viewers of that then and there. Oh well.
You are better person than I am about all this, I think. I don't forgive. Instead, I take it as an opportunity to grumble.
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Date: 2009-06-17 08:33 pm (UTC)I mean, time will tell (pun? unintentional) as to how much harm this past year has done to the show. It remains to be seen how people will react to the new Doctor and whether he can win over some of the legions of Tennant fans. Maybe Moffat really will turn out to be the magician a lot of people thought he was before the backlash started, and maybe Matt Smith really will be the best Doctor ever. And maybe I'll win the lottery and become President of the World... XD Staying positive - that's the thing, LOL.
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Date: 2009-06-11 02:41 am (UTC)This was brilliant. Too many brilliant things to point out anything specific. Although, I absolutely love how Seven still is/was/will be the Oncoming Storm at the end. Not everything can be changed.
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Date: 2009-06-12 08:41 pm (UTC)It's like I told
I think he probably would have won the Time War had he been participating in it, but that's probably a thought for another time and another fic.
Yes, please.
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Date: 2009-06-13 08:41 pm (UTC)Ah well, hopefully when Eleven and Moffat come on the scene they will redress some of this stuff. I quite enjoyed Planet of the Dead, actually, in an undemanding sort of way, apart from a couple of moments of dodginess, so hopefully Ten's last couple of hours onscreen won't be too painful. I kind of dread the RTD-penned regeneration scene, though...
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Date: 2009-06-14 02:09 am (UTC)Which I can actually hear Six saying to Davros.
Word on everything you've said here.