Dancing

[jjpor]

Fic: Dancing

Well, I blame community.livejournal.com/calufrax/ for stoking up my innate Four/Romana shippiness with their reckless and inflammatory recommendations of various fine examples of said ship during the course of the past week. I also have had this idea about Four/Romana "dancing" together (either literally or in the Stephen Moffat sense) for some time now, from where I came by it I could not say. So, even though I have WIPs in progress, I wrote this instead. It maybe gets a bit racy, but rest assured I bottled out when it came to portraying, er...actual physical relations. Feedback etc. always welcome. As always, while it would certainly be nice and possibly financially rewarding were I to own Doctor Who and its associated properties, alas I do not; they very definitely belong to the BBC:

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Comments

"Last Man Standing"

[mickeyk.livejournal.com]

Good story so far.

“Only if I can call you “Sweetie”,” he shot back. The all had a good laugh about that,

Should be, They all had

Jack joined in the cheers, even though he felt cold inside; the rum didn’t even effect him all that much;

Should be, didn't even affect him

They ended up in one of town’s less reputable watering holes,

Should be, in one of the town's less


Damn, that's a heartbreaking fic. Poor Jack, alone indeed.

You need to write more, focusing on Jack!

Re: "Last Man Standing"

[jjpor.livejournal.com]

Thanks for spotting the typos - all corrected now.

Yes, I was quite pleased with this one; I like writing about Jack, he's certainly an interesting character with a lot of facets. Hopefully, I will write some more about him in the not too distant future.