Fic: Family Ties

[jjpor]

Fic: Family Ties - Two: Not in Kansas

The next part - this took a bit longer than I thought, mainly because this scene grew and grew. Originally, it was only meant to be the first half of this chapter. It also proved quite hard to write for some reason, hence the delay. Be warned - some quite nasty violence towards the end of this part.

The link:

www.whofic.com/viewstory.php

Comments

[clocketpatch]

After sleeping on it, I was wondering... the farmer at the cafe, he was totally a Watcher wasn't he?

[jjpor.livejournal.com]

He was?! O.o To be honest, you're cleverer than me, because I didn't spot the implications there, but...yeah...I can see it. Hmm, I might steal that, actually... :)

[evilawyer.livejournal.com]

Read it the other night, and meant to tell you that it was wonderfully descriptive in a gritty way, but the Internet wouldn't let me.

[jjpor.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much indeed! :) Glad you liked the description...and the grit.

And damn you, internet! Always messing up at the wrong time...